He mounted the kerb outside the train station and did not shut off the engine but left it running as he got out of the car and walked towards the sliding entrance doors.
You have a way of pulling the reader quietly along and then suddenly removing the floorboards beneath them. 😭
I honestly thought someone was going to stop him. Instead you left me worrying about the train driver, the passengers, and especially the woman who simply walked away covered in blood as if she had expected it all along.
The station breathing "like lungs" was beautifully done.
Thank you for sharing your gift. And thank you for supporting my own strange little corner of writing where chairs are interrogated, Joseph complains about detours, and Arnold Palmers remain under investigation. 😏🤍💜
You have a way of pulling the reader quietly along and then suddenly removing the floorboards beneath them. 😭
I honestly thought someone was going to stop him. Instead you left me worrying about the train driver, the passengers, and especially the woman who simply walked away covered in blood as if she had expected it all along.
The station breathing "like lungs" was beautifully done.
Thank you for sharing your gift. And thank you for supporting my own strange little corner of writing where chairs are interrogated, Joseph complains about detours, and Arnold Palmers remain under investigation. 😏🤍💜
Thank you so much for another lovely comment! And you’re very welcome ☺️
oh oh oh oh oh
wasnt ready for that.
oh.
Thanks Ben.
do you have something else planned for here?
Thank you Linda.
Do you mean a future book, or a sequel? No plans yet, but never say never!
Are you going to remain on SS and write?
Oh yes, definitely 😊
I'm pleased about that :)
Thank you 🥰
Ahh! That tricky Daniel!!!
He sure did it with flair! Yikes. Love, Virg
I was holding my breath! Well, that's how you do it if you want to survive in someone else... Not 100% guarantee though